Improving the Writing

English has always been my strong point in school. Writing comes naturally, but there are areas where I struggle because nobody is perfect. In this class, I hope to make my writing flow. I have a tendency to get eager while writing, and my paper jumps from topic to topic. After a revision, it usually makes more sense, but in the moment my fingers are flying over the keyboard with ideas. I also get stuck while writing. I will have ideas that make sense in my head, but I can struggle transfer those ideas from my brain to my paper. I want to learn how to make a stronger thesis statement, because I get the key point of a thesis statement, but I am looking to make them longer and stronger. 

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